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Revelation

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Poetry
is the art
of saying
two things
and
revealing one
but slowly.  

There's a twist;
your arm
now broken.




Revelation
© 2010 Mark Pearce
Too sweet?

Actually I was playing with a concept.

Instead of the surprise ending re-defining the meaning of the work, I tried to use it to redefine the spirit of the author.

SURPRISE!
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PrettyCrazy's avatar
Ahhhh. Yes. Or perhaps, saying nothing and revealing all.